Jeremy said: "it's very cool!!!"
And now the corrections:
- the sky must be more dark
- push the highlights: keep them really sharp (very reflective and shiny)
- the straw must be soak: more dark
- add sharp highlights also on the background hill
- add reflex on the street: it's a giant puddle!
Thanks very much!
Jeremy Fenske: www.jeremyfenskeart.com