Thursday 29 October 2015

Hi! 
Here's my teacher's feedbacks:

FEEDBACK 2:
- The foreground must be darker and with less contrast
- ok the strong and limited range of values, but now I can add some more values (to show   
  the shapes of the cars, the internal of the buildings and to render the people)
- add details to reinforce the focal point
- don't forget the importance of some shadows: some of them are useful to direct the 
  eyes on the focal point
- when the style is so graphic: use a soft brush on the frame corners to enhance the focal  
  point






FEEDBACK 1:
- strong composition!
- even if in the film the foreground is bright, it's not important: so do it darker and blur.
- lighter a bit the column on the right: 
          1) it's on the same level as the cat
          2) helps framing (it's a framing element)
          3) helps the eyes moving up and around ->keeps the eyes engaged to the scene







FEEDBACK 3:
-attention: we work on compressed images -> lots of light informations get lost, so we need to use brightness/contrast on the reference image (checking the lost values) 



THANKS A MILLION!!!

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