Saturday, 21 November 2015

FEEDBACK on week 4: Creating Composition with Value

My teacher Jeremy Fenske (link: has corrected my first study:

- OK the choice of the line drawing
- the FOCAL POINT is very dynamic
- OK the cloud added behind the focal point
- OK the light on the ground -> it  bounces on the pumpkins 
- add the edge of the frame
- add a path, a street: it helps the eyes to go to the focal point; and balances the image
- add the AMBIENT LIGHT: the light from the sky bounces on the pumpkins
- add some core shadows
- every element has its own value: give the same value for the pumpkins, and a different one for the leaves -> for the sake of CLARITY

This is my corrected paint.

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